Because I'm getting way too rambly and I might as well just make a ginormous ramble post.
See, what' s the point of rambling about two pages? It's already chapter five!
That's kind of creepy and derogatory. Emily Dickinson - slant of light. Richard Selzer - glistening peritonium (whatever that is). Faulkner - muddy bottom of a little girl's drawers. Wow. >_>
As if I were DYING? Well, I guess that could give you inspiration. But that makes it sound like you'd write better IF you were dying which I'm pretty sure is not true. Also, if all fiction was written for the terminally ill, that would SUCK. At least we wouldn't get stuff like Tw-------.
I like sentences. But they have to be good sentences. Bad sentences suck.
Makes more sense to write one big book? Yeah. Sure. Or you could just, you know, write a giant compilation of short stories. Wouldn't that ALSO make sense, considering your writing ability probably improves over time = doesn't matter if your earlier stories suck, because your newer ones don't as opposed to, LOL MY WRITING JUMPED HELLLA AWESOME. I don't even know what I'm talking about anymore.
"You might as well write Moby-Dick." OKAY.
Can it be done? YES IT CAN. Can I do it? Probably not, BUT TRY ANYWAYS. Insoluble. T.T, chemistry.
German...mystic? Sorry to all you Germans out there, I just imagined voodoo Hitler.
Alligator wrestler. I LOL'D. SO HARD. GATOR-WRESTLINGGGGGGGGGGG! BUWAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH
Oooh. I think I like all the last segments of these chapters. DRAW, DRAW, DRAW.... ANTONIOOOOO.
Ferrari Burning? waht? HE STRUCK. THE LOGGGGGGG.
Yeah, I think this is going way downhill. Way too many random short stories that I can't honestly really relate with writing.
Row up the skies? At least that sounds nice.
Bellingham? It has an airport? -.-
I live in Washington guys, don't look at me like that -_-
Also, that's kind of rude, Dillard sounds kind of condescending towards Dave Rahm when he takes her up flying. And wow, terrible - "A few years later, Mount St. Helens did blow."
Really? Bellingham? atlas? What?
DO A BARREL ROLLLLLLLLLL. THERE ARE BARREL ROLLS IN THIS BOOK. GREAT VICTORY. Do the boost to get through?
Yep. Terrible.
Wow. So I definitely did like the first chapter. But then it just got really rambly and off-tangent and not as fun to read. Also, she seems kind of condescending in a LOT of her stories.
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